I know this post is supposed to be about virginity, and it
is, vaguely. I’d like to quote fifty shades of grey at you here “and then he
ripped through my virginity”. I’d like to assure readers this doesn’t happen,
and if it does it’s not a good thing. Even most submissives don’t like agonising
pain for the hell of it. I am of the opinion that your first sexual experience shouldn't be with a man twice your age, who your not actually in any kind of relationship with. Call me old fashioned, I may not believe sex before marriage will get you smitten down by god, but I think there should always be some emotion behind sex.
My main problem with the book is it’s whiny, yes I’ve read
worse fan fiction, but the characters are over dramatic and the entire plot is
unrealistic. Also it’s not rape, but it doesn’t actually portray a proper BDSM
lifestyle you’re given the impression Mr. Grey is an experienced dom, but he loses
control and spanks whatsherface without her consent, and without a safe word. This
is pretty much abuse, and such a lapse in control does not make for a good
dominant.
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| I still have high hopes for the film though. |
Here is some better BDSM twilight fan fiction if you are this
way inclined:
Todostrieb
P.s sorry this post is late, I was ill L
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